Friday, August 31, 2007

????~~~????


Are you thinking, what I'm thinking?
Are you carving a niche in the void of your lonely heart?
Are you missing me?

Is silence,whispering my name into your ears?
Are little things, colouring your memories?
Are you missing me?

Wondering won't wait any more..
I'm missing you, is all that of which I'm sure..

2 comments:

Kartik Shankar said...

Are you thinking, what I'm thinking?
Are you carving a niche in the void of your lonely heart?
Are you missing me?

Is silence,whispering my name into your ears?
Are little things, colouring your memories?
Are you missing me?

Wondering won't wait any more..
I'm missing you, is all that of which I'm sure..


In response:
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Yes - I think and think so true.
A throbbing heart - in a lonely few
Was it not true - when I told you so?
Dont you see it now - I, so miss you.

The Silence screams in my ears so weak
Beaten down strength - so much so meek.
That I dont see colours ; that I dont see you.
I feel them now - them of every hue.

So I wonder what it was - if it wasnt us
And i shrug and I moan and i then make a fuss
If what wasnt mine wouldnt come back now.
Should I hold it back - you tell me how?

Lovely write !!! tugged at my heart!!!

PS. I have started putting up my poems in http://geekverse.blogspot.com - so I now have a couple of em :)

Cheers and keep writing!!!

---K.

snigdha said...

@K
WOW!!!
THANKS..
but i can access only my own blog frm my col..others r blocked..will surely chk urs out smday!
bye

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