Wednesday, March 24, 2010

And they were such kids..falling for it

And they were such kids, falling for it,
falling in the sweet trap of the sweeter trip,
They not at all could, wipe off the silly smiles,
they had no idea what was wrong with their heart,their face and their sleepless nights..

And they were acting so grown up..yet so juvenile,
saying it, believing it... 'in love' , in a while
Not knowing what lay ahead, not bothering to be scared,
fearless and carefree, they tread their pathways..

And they thought they knew it all,
little did they wonder what happens after the big fall..
tiffs that turn into fights,
and the missed and hung up calls..

And they learnt with every step and hurdle,
what a pool of love it was with the small and big puddles..
they learnt from their mistakes and learnt from every tear that rolled,
the fear of being alone without the other, the love of not letting go..

And they thought, what people said mattered,
and sat down for love introspection,
Little did they know it was their belief that mattered,
nobody's justification..

Weeks and Months and Years went by,
their love was tested by time..
And all they did was look back and smile..
at the kids, the juveniles and the memorabilia for life..


Ani said...

cute... i think 'to fall in love' is an incorrect phrase...

coz actually u rise in love and its beautiful..

very well expressed emotion..

and uhh... beautiful pic...

arnav said...

Beautiful poem, esp loved the last stanza..

And the pic looks familiar :) though somebody has muted the colors!!

snigdha said...

@Ani and arnav- Thank you for reading and appreciating the poem..:)

Anonymous said...

very very well written ma'am and truly very expressive!


snigdha said...

thanks fr reading it janhvi...

paridhi said...

Beautifully expressed!! Loved it.. :)

arpita said...

now that makes me senti snigy

i think this best describes our lives together for so many years!
just love it.

thanks for being a part of my life n i wanna say this to all others as well

these five years wud'nt have been d same without u all


snigdha said...

@arpita,,,gosh think straight!! heheh thanks fr dropping by...and by the way...can u be serious ever??? tho i love ur funny ways...

astha said...

wow...very well written!!! i mean i luvd d one u wrote 4 d colg magazine as this is a complete side all together :)

Reflections said...

Good work of ART.May be they also exchanged some secret yet solemn vows..A few of them lined up for posterity !!

" I shall hoist the sails of understanding in thine heart,
Which shan't be, by the wildest storm, taken apart!!

I shall drink from thine eyes if ever I do,
I shall smoke my life to rekindle you."

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